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    hi2all, Great insight. I agree and will try to rework the hair. Hair is a problem for me at this time. I need to figure out or develop a technique. For me at this time its like something going over my head.

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    Looks better to me.
    The number of strands doesn't give the feel to be thought too much though, more like "going with the flow", and some of the single strands on the shoulder or the forehead give me a strange feel. I think the result on your previous pieces "Andrew" and "woman practice sculpt" was better in the way the strands ended on the shoulders (I'm not talking about the amount of detail you added, just the blocking)

    I think you could take a look at the " Pieta' " of Michelangelo

    http://maspo.altervista.org/pieta3.jpg
    http://iaincarstairs.files.wordpress...eta_christ.jpg
    http://www.artinvest2000.com/michela...ettaglio-2.jpg

    or the " Maddalena penitente " of Canova
    www.museidigenova.it/zoom/canova.jpg
    http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedi...itente,_05.JPG
    http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3045/2...8036d025_z.jpg
    http://www.stile.it/fnts/arte/immagi...ria/400/02.jpg

    As usual don't be distracted by the small details, just look at the blocking, how well defined the masses are.
    Until you refine your personal style, I think they're closer to what you're trying to achieve for now.

    Anyway In my opinion it's overall a good improvement already.
    Last edited by hi2all; 03-19-13 at 12:53 PM.

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    What a cute girl.

    Excellent work.

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    hi2all thank you for the pics, they will defiantly make a difference. Will redo and post.

    Knacki, thanks, really appreciate the compliment.





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