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    Default Male Head Study

    Hey guys, This is my second sculpt. I am just trying to get use to zbrush and anatomy. I have a lot to learn so I would love some feedback and critiques on what I can improve on.

    Thanks in advance guys and gals

    This is the bust I started with:

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    This is what I have so far:

    Edit: I am really having trouble with lips and eyelids. Any advice would be awesome!

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    Last edited by NickNitro; 08-20-11 at 11:48 AM.

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    Looking good so far, though maybe protrude his jaw a little less. Unless it's intentional.

    In regards to the lids, remember they follow the curvature of the eyes. They need to dip in at the nose.
    Looks like a caucasian male, so his upper lid would be further out than lower.

    And maybe, dim down the brows and cheekbones.

    Hope this helps, keep up the good work!
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    Thanks that helps a lot. I really appreciate it. Ill deff take your crits into account and make those changes.

    You're right about the cheek bones they protrude out a bit much.

    For some reason with the lips and eyelids I have a hard to getting believable creasing for the lids and ridge around the lips, I guess all will come in time

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    Very promising start. I made a few notes on parts I thought could use some tweaks. I find eyes are always difficult to do myself. Hope these notes are helpful!

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    Webhead: Thanks for the post! Yes I am having a hard time with the lips and eyelids getting them to look realistic but I will work on them a lot more tonight. I have made some minor tweaks I just havent posted them yet. Tonight when I get home from work Ill work more on this guy.

    Again thanks this helps a lot.

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