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    Haha thanks i appreciate that. Even being compared to that epic creature is a compliment.

    I agree they totally should. Never enough contests.
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    ...coming along nicely. Recent post is a definite improvement imo. Some things to consider

    1. Moisture in the mouth. It needs the wetness of saliva, maybe even have some elongated strands arcing from the top to the bottom teeth.
    2. Lighting is very harsh. The image looks blown out, and the shadows are too deep...they look solid black. I get the feeling you are going for a high noon, sunny day. If that's the case, check out the one render on Cedric Seaut's thread. http://www.zbrushcentral.com/showthr...tle-Box/page12 It's the only actual render on this page, so should be easy to find. It's of his DWIV character(s). Also, if you are viewing his most recent work first, then it's actually on page 50; not page 12 as the link suggests. Hope that's clear
    3. The color of the legs is noticeably more saturated than anything else on the creature...it just seems weird to me and throws the image out of balance. Maybe see what the orange on the plates would look like with that kind of
    saturation, or perhaps desaturate the legs a bit...just something to balance out the image a bit more.

    I hope this helps. cheers
    Last edited by kraemology; 11-01-13 at 04:51 PM. Reason: Additional Content

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    Default Moar!!!

    Continuing my shark creature adventures!!

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