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    Default Failed prototype plane

    Here is the piece I have been working on the last 2 months!


    Feedback would be awesome and thanks!


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    Hey xiaoAbe ,
    great piece in the first place , you have put a lot of effort and work in it !

    If you watch your image , without knowing the title ( " failed prototype plane " ) , then it would not
    be so clear why they are sitting there on the sand and rocks . In other words , it's not instantly clear

    what has happened here , not to me anyway.....

    Secondly , if they would've been crashed , than in some way they would at least have some minor injuries ,
    but they seem to be totally okay ..
    These are the first things which came to mind to me , when you asked for comment .

    Take care , you have some good skills anyway .

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    Thanks for the feedback Monji!

    I think I was so into this project I did not see that the meaning of the title cleared up the piece, when it should be the other way around. I was thinking of roughing the piece up more in texturing and adding more dirt to the character, but I see that I may need to add more injuries to the model.

    Again thanks for the feedback!

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