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    Default the body

    here is the full body, I need to work the forearms and the calf muscle more. But eventually It will have pants!
    chartres.JPG
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    Pretty good, but I have some critiques.

    The abs need to be flattened out more, they look too inflated.


    Also, the overall shape / anatomy could use some tweaking. You might want to compare your renders to some real body builders.


    The face looks like an old guy to me, I don't know if that's what you are going for, but though I'd point it out.

    he has a lot of wrinkles, sagging skin...
    Last edited by GabeM; 06-14-07 at 07:14 PM.

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    Default Hi!

    I thanks for your comments I take it in consideration. As for the old guy I dont know if you had see on my anatomy tread (anatomy wip) the face? But yeah I want to make someone in his 50s. As i say last time I dont want to make him a bodybuilder or neither a wrestler but maybe more a experience warrior... I take inspiration on Matte3d who did a soldier in his 50 a little bit like Big Boss in metal gear solide. AS for the proportion what would you suggest me ... I cant really point what doesnt fit...
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  4. #19

    Default again...

    Im in the overall happy with the proportion and anatomy... need to work some finer detail more on the hand for exemple... On the face I would try to make jim a 2 or 3 days bearb with alphas and pore skin etc... On the muscle I will make him big vein. But i think will do that when a get the Zbrush 3. tomorrow i think im gonna make him some piece of clothing and armoring in maya then import them to add them some fine detail and pose them. I will give it a look of a barbare gladiator feel. I know its is pretty far from my original concept hehe . Here some views of my work and my charactere becaming the big green giant! hehe jsut for laugth enjoy!! beef5.JPG beef6.JPG beef7.JPG beef9.JPG beef8hulk2.JPG
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  5. #20

    Default Finally!

    I got Zbrush 3! I took all the evening trying to go trougth some tutorial and quickstart as well as trying some new cool feature as the transpose and the subtool. I mean once you get it it works much better then the multimarker in my humble sens. I like as well the new shader as the gorilla and the pearl cavity they look so cool. So this is a first post of my charactere with an helmet that iive done this week with zbrush 2. I think it got a cool looks but i will need to refine it. Ive also started a shoulder pad and plan to do boots as soon as i can but it still need some improvement on the anatomy. As I said on a last thread It will be a warrior from sowhere between cimeria and sparta hehe. Maybe a rival of King Conan. So I played a little with the transpose tool and get that result. statue.JPG
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    Here some update of my character. I think now that am ready to go on micro details as the overall shape and musculature seems good to me. I will Add it some alpha and lazy mouse detail. culturisteFBS.JPG
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    pose.JPG here some fun with the transpĂ´se tool...
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  8. #23

    Default some accessories!

    Hi im beginning to pose some accessories like you can see his helmet and a shoulder pad but they both need a lote of tweaking still.... I will do it boots too and Ive already done a great sword but i still asking myself if a put him a big hammer ....guerrier.JPG
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    Try an Double Sided Battle Axe It will be fun to see how he turns out.
    It won't get smooth till you knock off some edges.

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    Hi,

    I think you are doing well with the anatomy, the little improvements are all going in the right direction, keep it up.
    I enjoyed reading this thread, because you are clearly trying hard and improving the model, but mostly because you sound like you are having so much fun doing it.
    I look forward to seeing him all dressed for battle.

    cheers,
    mick

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    Default Thanks guys!

    First of all thanks guys it really touches me!! I needed it

    Ghostly Specter: Yeah I think a double axe could be killer to ill will definetely try it. maybe I ll make 3 pose with tree different weapon

    micgaz: yeah youre right its the fun and the ambition to do the best modelling that I can that continue to drive me forward even when I get tired of it and discourage by the among of hight quality work on this forum. im glad that you follow my work. As i dont get to much reply sometime I think that its is so bad that no one give a s%?& of it heheh Ill take an eyes on yours too !
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    I just plain like the build of this guy. I'm not entirely sure why, either! Great job, can't wait to see more.

  13. #28

    Default some more wardrobe...

    I still work on my character and get used a little bit much with zbrush3. Ive jsut discover the mask its pretty cool what we can do with that dont know why I ever use them...Anyway I plan to use them more... So there it is the majority off the accessories are done and block I will tweak them more with hd subdivision later this week. If any have Ideas or tip to oriented me in a good way or upgrade some parts feel free as usual! warrior.JPG
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  14. #29

    Default some little update here...

    Dont have too much time last week as I work on an other project with a friend of mine.. So I begin try posing him with is accessories... not definitive im jsut trying to see some posing.. Ive try a little to pose the finger but i seem to have a hell of hard time but ill fine a way... Maybe Ill redo some accessories liike the leather strap on his chest. Then after ill go on more texturing. Rigth here a pict with a battle axe... Obiously it need more refinement on it. Ill try with a greatsword later... enjoy! any comments are welcome warrior4.JPG
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    Yeah man! Looking slick! Keep working on it I like the update.
    It won't get smooth till you knock off some edges.

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