i kind of new to this and i wanted to get some feed back on one of my images
i kind of new to this and i wanted to get some feed back on one of my images
I like his scar, in a way the whole thing looks good. Like something you might find in an abstract art museum. I would be interested in your process even if your are new, i can always learn something from the basics, its always good to practice simple stuff.
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i used the zspheres to create indents for his eyes, ears, and mouth and for the nose i just used another zsphere but brought it forward
I personally just like to use polyspheres or cubes for busts, but I guess whatever you like better. Your main issue at the moment is just facial proportion, I did a sketchover to sort of show where the features should go:
Aside from that, I would address volume. The nose doesn't come out enough, the eyes don't go in far enough and there is a lack of overall facial structure. Work on the proportion and that'll be a good start though, good luck.
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ok i made a few slight updates
good.... i think. what is it.
its a face of an old warrior who is battle hardened
new angle hope u enjoy and im happy about feed back any yes i know it looks strange and very abstract
Alright, this time I actually went into Photoshop and used the liquify to rough out the proportions. They aren't perfect I'm sure, but they'll get you going in the right direction. I also did some painting to show which areas need more volume and which have gotten blobby and need to be smoothed down:
ill see if i can get it to look like that
Just get the move tool and play around with it. You might want to even consider moving down to a lower subdivision level so you can move large forms easily without getting bogged down in little details. Also consider smoothing down some of your forms past where you think you should. They'll retain their essential qualities, but it will allow you to rework areas that have gotten blobby or overworked.
thanks
any one got some ideas for this
new updated face he has eyes i all so fixed his nose and make new scars next to his mouth is their any one else who can think of any thing to change
i know his eyes look wierd
Last edited by ryu moto; 03-03-09 at 11:46 AM.